My potential title is: Torn Pages...A Book Nonetheless
I can't think of anything else
I have two different opening paragraphs and i can't decide which one to use. One is describing this weird forest in detail and then it's my head. The other is, well I took this poem i wrote aboput being in the hospital and made it into an introductary paragraph. Ah I don't know what to do.
I think it's really sad that poor people dont have sufficient healthcare. And i guess some people think the government shouldn't pay for it because then it would be like the more fortunate people are paying for what the poor people are too "lazy" to. I can't believe that so many people actually think that all homeless and people in poverty in America are lazy. IT's a vicious cycle once one is born into poverty. "But you can work your way through college, you can get a good education if you try". Yeah easy for you to say when you're surrounded bykids who do try and teachers who do believe in students. Some people don't have that environment. Plus, if you go to a crappy school, and do do well, it's still harder to get into college, and not everyone can get scholarships. I wonder how many people on welfare don't try to get a job. Cause I'm pretty sure the government keeps a close eye on one who is on welfare. Whatever some people will never change their mind. I've actually known of people who look down on people who change their mind. But changing your mind doesn't always mean indecicve, it could just mean that one is open to other ideas and admits when they were wrong. K I'll stop now.
Tuesday, September 23, 2008
Thursday, September 18, 2008
Narrative
My whole narrative so far needs a lot of work. I need to figure out how to take all the thoughts on my paper and put them into the form of a narrative story, without being so direct.
"It has been the major setback of my life, but I am afraid of who I would be without it".
I don't know how to imply that without saying it.
"It has been the major setback of my life, but I am afraid of who I would be without it".
I don't know how to imply that without saying it.
Wednesday, September 10, 2008
Life is stupid but i love it anyways
OK actually I changed my mind. Life is cool, filled with awesome, incredible things and phenomina, PEOPLE are stupid. I noticed something. I feel so bad for poor people, hungry, thirsty people. But then on the other hand people annoy me sooo much. I don't undersdtand. Actually maybe I do. Because the people that bug me are the people that don't care. People who are absorbed in umm I don't know whatever their absorbed in, sometimes I don't really want to know.
Discover
Sooo my title.
I like fairies and I'm bella's dutchess, hence Ms Fairy Dutchess.
Now I don't know what to write about.
What could I write about every week? Hmmmm..... I think I'll just write about life.
I like fairies and I'm bella's dutchess, hence Ms Fairy Dutchess.
Now I don't know what to write about.
What could I write about every week? Hmmmm..... I think I'll just write about life.
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